The art is interesting. The profile still needs the artist. Keep a relaxed expression, simplify the repeated outfits, and get into the frame with the things you make.
The big grin, crowded edge and busy glasses make this friendly moment look more effortful than it needs to.
Use an easy closed-mouth expression, tidy the hair and simplify the frame. Keep the outdoor setting and relaxed seat.
A close crop and downturned gaze make a plain black tee portrait feel stiff.
Soften the expression and give the hair a cleaner shape. Keep it recognizably casual, not a new headshot persona.
The cat is on your shoulder and you are actually in the moment. This shows an interest with the person attached.
Keep the interaction. A brighter version would help, but the idea is already stronger than a hobby shown on its own.
The repeated outfit, glasses and crowded pub frame add more visual noise than variety.
A plain dark inner tee, tidier hair and an easier expression clean up the scene. Choose one strong pub photo rather than repeating the same look.
The artwork fills a whole profile slot while telling us nothing about you in the room.
Replace this with a photo of you painting or standing beside the finished work. Keep the hobby and add the person.
Another artwork-only image repeats the same omission. Two slots are now doing a gallery's job.
Use one strong image of the making process instead. Give the remaining slot to another part of your life.
my mom talked to your mom and she said we can hang out
go to a gallery, pick one painting each, and make our case. You don’t have to agree with me. You do need a good argument.
invisible ice on the pavement while i’m locked in on an audiobook
getting so invested in an audiobook that the pavement delivers the plot twist. What should I listen to next?
bought a homeless man a mcdonald’s meal and then he wanted his club cover charge paid
thinking I was buying someone lunch. One McDonald’s meal later, I was being pitched a nightclub sponsorship.
Edited images illustrate proposed changes; they are not original photographs or evidence of dating results.